Day 4 - Prompt: A Hostage Scene
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Day 4 - A Hostage Scene
This one gave me trouble. My original fic was set in a shared universe from a forum I'm on. It was a much more traditional and straightforward hostage scene. With criminal hostage takers, hostages, and even a hero. I also didn't need to run a word count on it to see that when I finished it was way, way, way over the max length limit.
So instead here's why younger brothers should watch out when their older sister is put in charge for the weekend...
( Jeffery's predicament under the cut )
ravenswept's 30 Days of Flash Fiction MemeMy 30 Days of Flashfic Index Page
Day 4 - A Hostage Scene
This one gave me trouble. My original fic was set in a shared universe from a forum I'm on. It was a much more traditional and straightforward hostage scene. With criminal hostage takers, hostages, and even a hero. I also didn't need to run a word count on it to see that when I finished it was way, way, way over the max length limit.
So instead here's why younger brothers should watch out when their older sister is put in charge for the weekend...
( Jeffery's predicament under the cut )